PART I
Falling Up.
Backwards- Sideways.
Original context brings submerged feelings to the epicenter of my surface.
Realzing my precious soul scars easily-
Learning intricate life lessons on one long seemingly meaningless journey.
So hurry now, before I'm gone.
Before I finally notice -
These bruises left on the inside.
PART II
Falling Up.
Somehow I find myself dancing in our midnight clouds
as this misty condensation trickles down my sinking skin.
Air suffocates my silent scream as I watch life itself vanish into remote vastness.
This is not the way I pictured it. Never in a million years would I have guessed you would be the cause of this lonely contradiction.
But look at me now.
Here I am.
Just *Falling Up.
Wow. This is so POIGNANT, so full of feeling. Reading it, I felt a stab to my heart. I felt your pain, your loneliness. That takes talent to make the reader FEEL what YOU are feeling.
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Thanks so much!! That is probably one of the greatest compliments you could give a young writer, because that is exactly what they are trying to do: make the audience feel. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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